Nayhan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[You Will Never Be Alive]

Awesome!

Starts off really good when the chimes are going and the strings and eiree voices come in. I would have liked it better if it had kept its orchestral and cleanness with less synth and digital sounding stuff. By half way through the mood the chimes and strings had created was gone. It's heaps good how you make your songs with so many sounds and effects though... aweomse song IO.

[==(MINDMINER)==]

Great work!

The atmosphere that the song creates is really awesome. The drums sound really good, the hardness of them works well. The background synths and noises are done really well and it isn't obvious that they've appeared but they slowly come in and out.

I was kind of expecting it to build up more at some point and for a lead to come in and the beat to pick up particularly after the metal and dubstep elements. The awesome moments are... awesome. It makes great background music and I could imagine it working really well with visuals.

I think it could have been better if the main riff changed at some point and something else came in. Also if the beat got faster at some point. An enjoyable song to listen to though and extremely well done ;)

[The song of gayness]

what!?

I didn't know you were gay Gumby...

[Lunar Funk]

Pretty good!

The instrument that comes in at 0:34 doesn't work to well cos everything else just seemed to drop away. Nice riffs and melodies. Your voice seems quite a lot deeper now than it is here :D

[Endeavour - Crescent Moon]

Awesome!

This sounds really great. It reminds me of the music in snowboard kids. I think you should change the sound of the drums particularly the high hat. I think you've done a great job with it though.

Endeavour responds:

Thanks for the review Nayhan.
Now that you mention it, the high hat does need a change indeed !.
Its to soft and high pitched only .. =S.

2 bad i lost the .flp file for this one.. meh.

Thanks though,
Endeavour.

[Dark Visions]

Nice start

The beat needed to be louder and you could have added a few more things to it (bass prog, strings) but it's simplicity could make it quite useful in a movie or game. Good job, keep trying different things.

TwoGuysSameFlash responds:

Thanks! Were learning the basics right now so were always looking for helpful reviews or tips!

[Castle Mountain]

Love it!

The strings and drums are heaps good, it would have been better if the end was stronger though, instead of it slowing down to end. You could probably improve it a but when it changes at 0:44. The start is awesome, really well done. Overall it's heaps good.

[She_Remix [Box-Killa]]

Excellent!!

Flows really well from one part to the next.
I don't really like it when the drums go really deep at the beggining.
Could be good if you tried to a similar song but without the drums so it's kind of like an orchestra. I reckon that could turn out really good.
Really good, keep it up.

[Dark Horse DEMO]

Great Work

The programmed drums do make it hard to hear the guitar.
You need to add more contrast between the louder parts and quiter parts.
The solo needed more of a lead up into it and vocals could add alot.
It's really good especially and the more songs you compose the better you'll get at composing them.

[~Never The Same~ by Cayler]

That's hell good!!

Brilliant song. At some parts the vocals were too quiet or loud.
If there are any effects on the vocals then it'd be better without them.
Your singing awesome though but the lyrics could be worked on a bit more.
You should get rid of the 'very' in the last line.
The instruments were heaps good but the 'tink' noise got a bit annoying once you noticed it.

Cayler responds:

Thanks, this was actually more of a test of my new mic at the time so many of the problems weren't sweated because of its unofficial-ness. lol The newer version is quite a bit different than this one.