Nayhan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mello like-ish]

Awesome Start

The sound and mood you've got going is really good. The start is good cos it's all clear but further in the instruments seem to get a bit too murky and distorted. Sometimes its better to keep your instruments clean. Great song, it would be good to see this finished.

Nothins responds:

lool maybe when i grow old and am retired i have no time to even start new songs because i work late hours i sleep all day. iunno. mabe i might maybe i wont

btw, its was the effect of the sound xD

[-Midna's Desperation-]

Nice work...

It's definently the most emotionally powerful song in the game. The original is much better but it is made by Koji Kondo and he has been making music for 20 years. I feel that the instruments you chose have taken away the emotion from it slightly. The notes aren't as crisp and there's not enough reverb. The quieter and higher instruments don't engulf you as much as there's not as large an array of tones.

I tried making a song that sounded similar to this and it was really good but then my laptop died and I lost everything :'(

bigjonny13 responds:

Lol, laptop fail.
Yeah, my music really needs a lot of work. If I ever end up going back to "making" music, there will be much more time put into it.

[Vegeta, Prince of Saiyans]

Hahah

Your good at changing your voice and doing different characters. What you need to work on is how you pronounce words. You should find some videos of people from different countries and try to replicate their accents. It's a bit too easy to tell that it's you but it might not as easy for others...

bigjonny13 responds:

Vegeta has a very interesting voice style. He properly pronounces every word, yet he makes them sound harsh at the same time. You might find it easy to tell it's me because you've heard me before though =P

[Endeavour - Crescent Moon]

Awesome!

This sounds really great. It reminds me of the music in snowboard kids. I think you should change the sound of the drums particularly the high hat. I think you've done a great job with it though.

Endeavour responds:

Thanks for the review Nayhan.
Now that you mention it, the high hat does need a change indeed !.
Its to soft and high pitched only .. =S.

2 bad i lost the .flp file for this one.. meh.

Thanks though,
Endeavour.

[Dark Visions]

Nice start

The beat needed to be louder and you could have added a few more things to it (bass prog, strings) but it's simplicity could make it quite useful in a movie or game. Good job, keep trying different things.

TwoGuysSameFlash responds:

Thanks! Were learning the basics right now so were always looking for helpful reviews or tips!

[~Never The Same~ by Cayler]

That's hell good!!

Brilliant song. At some parts the vocals were too quiet or loud.
If there are any effects on the vocals then it'd be better without them.
Your singing awesome though but the lyrics could be worked on a bit more.
You should get rid of the 'very' in the last line.
The instruments were heaps good but the 'tink' noise got a bit annoying once you noticed it.

Cayler responds:

Thanks, this was actually more of a test of my new mic at the time so many of the problems weren't sweated because of its unofficial-ness. lol The newer version is quite a bit different than this one.

[~|| Stolen heart]

Pretty Good

Some of the higher notes of the guitar would've been better if they were lower. Also the synth came in a bit too loud and I wouldn't have used the trumpet or whatever instrument came in at 1:26 but a quieter instrument that would have made it just a bit more sad and mysterious. It's really good though and would've taken me heaps long to come up with something this good.

T-Free responds:

Thanks for your criticism, I'll work on this song soon.
If something new is finished, you'll be contacted by me.
Thanks for your review, Nayhan!^^