This is quite bad.
The only part that sounded good was the background chords that came in at 0:07 which I doubt you composed yourself. The rest of it is badly composed and mixed.
Try changing the sounds and EQ of your instruments and not just using the default sounds. Also try making your song less repetitiveand not using introductions from classical pieces.
Nice work! :D
The slow, quieter beginning to the song works well. It's probably a bit too quiet at the very start. Using a change in EQ as well as a volume climb can produce a cool sound.
I thought the voice clip came in a bit unsmoothly and just seemed to be too contrasting from the rest of the music. With the glitch effects, they went out of the rhythm of the song at a few points making it sound a bit odd.
The build up the synth riffs was good and overall it is a really good song. I think some of the background sounds needed to be a bit stronger during parts. Also try and experiment with drums a bit more. Cool stuff :P
Pretty good.
The piano at the start is really good. I think the wobble needs to come in with a bigger bang. I heard the Conspiracy in there at 1:46!! it's a very good sytrus preset. The sound that comes in at 2:08 is very good but the wobble didn't seem to go with it too well. Overall it's pretty well done but you probably could have fine tuned it a bit more.
Awesome Start
The sound and mood you've got going is really good. The start is good cos it's all clear but further in the instruments seem to get a bit too murky and distorted. Sometimes its better to keep your instruments clean. Great song, it would be good to see this finished.
lool maybe when i grow old and am retired i have no time to even start new songs because i work late hours i sleep all day. iunno. mabe i might maybe i wont
btw, its was the effect of the sound xD
Nice work...
It's definently the most emotionally powerful song in the game. The original is much better but it is made by Koji Kondo and he has been making music for 20 years. I feel that the instruments you chose have taken away the emotion from it slightly. The notes aren't as crisp and there's not enough reverb. The quieter and higher instruments don't engulf you as much as there's not as large an array of tones.
I tried making a song that sounded similar to this and it was really good but then my laptop died and I lost everything :'(
Lol, laptop fail.
Yeah, my music really needs a lot of work. If I ever end up going back to "making" music, there will be much more time put into it.
Hahah
Your good at changing your voice and doing different characters. What you need to work on is how you pronounce words. You should find some videos of people from different countries and try to replicate their accents. It's a bit too easy to tell that it's you but it might not as easy for others...
Vegeta has a very interesting voice style. He properly pronounces every word, yet he makes them sound harsh at the same time. You might find it easy to tell it's me because you've heard me before though =P
Pretty good...
Good melodies, it's a bit too short though. I think it could have done with one more simple synth in it to just make it a bit fuller. Also this is not ambient but perhaps R&B or something else.
Awesome!
The start is good, how come after 30 after it drops out the high hat comes in louder but then fades out? You needed to really get a beat going suddenly like at 1:00 I was really expecting some other instrument to come in and break the repetitiveness. I felt like the synth that slowly faded in at from 1:40 - 2:20 should have started a bit earlier and it needed to get more climatic. Although that might turn it into more of a techno track, so I think some simple piano or bell or something high would have worked nicely. The sounds you have are really good though and fit nicely together.
Pretty good.
I didn't really like the change at 1:44. This really shows how much you've improved, there's still heaps of things in this song that I couldn't do though. One problem is that the synth and the bass riff behind it were often not in tune and it sounded like two songs playing at the same time instead of one song. Good job though.
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