This movie is SOOOO good!!!!
Reminds me of the sesh's I used to have back in the day.
Why does the chicken have a nose not a beak?!?!
Not that good...
The song is pretty funny and this is made well but this is extremely over-rated.
In your narwhals & do you have a waffle the animation was really good but the animation in this isn't that good.
You should try something else besides a repetitive music video.
This movie is definitely underscored at 3.99!
Similar to Chluaid, but still shows your own style.
Didn't quite understand what happened after she was sucked into the hive thing.
Great work, keep on making more movie's like this.
Maybe try something new & different.
This and Chluaid's movies are both set in forests, hills and bright landscapes.
Great animating with comedic unexpected ending.
And good song choice to (Millencolin - Fox).
NEVER ask people to go easy on you just because it's your first flash!!!
You should really be practicing frame by frame animation or tweening animation.
Sprite movies are usually pretty boring, lag heaps and you are limited to the sprites you can find.
Oh yea and mario doesn't look to good with dbz powers.
You did the music really well.
It got really boring when they were just doing blasting each other and the camera kept on going back and forth.
There was no story and the choose there destiny thing was really just an add on.
No it gave you a oppertunity to choose who you wanted to win nobody wants to see dbz warriors win all the time but next time it will be alot better
Pretty good lip synching.
You did that pretty well.
If looked weird when he said 'w' though,
and wasn't that interesting.
You should have reduced the music quality.
The meaning of your movie worked well and you showed it through your animations well. The lyrics and meanings of the song matched what you wanted to express and usually it is hard to find the right song.
You needed to improve the backgrounds it would make your movie that much better. The star backgounds were good you should make the stars slighty smaller and ad a the glow filter. The flowers were really good and the black silhoute with the tree and two people was good.
If your going to use text and so often you should add effects around it.
Some of the animation could have been improved in places. Where there were the two people who you put alpha on it looked weird because you could see the end of their arm/leg through their bodies. You should have made all their bodyparts movement and put it all into one movieclip then changed the alpha of the movieclip as a whole.
Overall an excellent movie!!
everything was good but I didn't like the idea about the animal student. Try and think of a better idea and you will be on the top 50 for sure. You could also make it longer.
Thank you for advice. However, you have had better like ideas for the animal student which why was, and I did not understand it because English was not proud. I am glad if good when I have you teach it.
The animation was great some effects could have been beter though. The music was awesome. At the start it sounded like a slow tune and then he shot the gun and it got better. It was well done. I liked it except the music should have continued at the end instead of stopping.
It's good for a first movie. Mine wasn't that good either. I still don't have a good movie on the web. Watch the movies you think are well animated and if you really want to make a good flash movie you will. Just play around on flash and do the tutorials on Newgrounds and you'll soon learn how to improve. But if you can't be stuffed taking your time to time to make a really good movie (like alot of people) you'll still get better. I hope to see your next one.
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